Angel of Death

Hey Jig! Thanks for the heads up! Again, I have no complaints. Your imagery is beyond entertaining and extremely beautiful. This whole world is so wonderous, and yes, I can ...

It looks like someone took out a paintbrush! But a nice pic and the mountains are extremely beautiful. I kinda thought of Misery when I saw this picture. Watch out ...

Hey Snoink! I just wanted to critique something of yours, because I haven't before. Well there really isn't anything wrong with this. It was beautiful! I could smell the imagery ...

Note: Everyone might want to read the first chapter to understand what is going on. All reviews are excepted and wanted. Also, if you haven't noticed, the italicized passages are ...

Hey Ash, I'm back! This was a good read. Its as descriptive and fun to read as the first version. There were a couple of things that I saw though: ...

I'll read this tomorrow. Thanks for the heads up!

I was in the last part to this but I kinda fell out. But Paramore asked me to join again, so here I am. Some of you may remember me ...

Oops! didn't know I posted twice :oops: But thanks Ash! I just started adding to this today. Hmm its a good guess but you don't quite have it. I'm sorry ...

Thanks Ash, and I understand, school just takes up a lot time. The review was much appreciated, as always, and I'm so happy that you like it because I was ...

Attention! I have a lot of stories that I want to try and continue and this one happens to be on the top of my list. This is basically about ...

Attention! I have a lot of stories that I want to try and continue and this one happens to be on the top of my list. This is basically about ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS!! Hah, my friends call me weird and at the beginning of high school, all of my friends went separate ways and books were all ...

This was really short but it was great chapter nonetheless. From previous comments, it seems to me that you've changed a lot and took out some scenes. Though I wonder ...

24,248 I feel like I'm really behind but I'm getting there.

Bravo, my friend, Bravo! This was a great end to the story. Though to answer your question, I think the end needs to be a little fixed up. And grape ...